tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6956320489266966835.post6901235822196703568..comments2013-04-04T19:56:34.418-07:00Comments on The Funferblog: Building DepthJames Funferhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03659211993745306602noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6956320489266966835.post-43920398159168139782011-08-08T21:31:25.766-07:002011-08-08T21:31:25.766-07:00A nice story James. Compelling. If you don't...A nice story James. Compelling. If you don't mind a couple of constructive comments - "commonly in the habit" seems redundant. A habit is by its nature common. Also, "folded over hundreds of times" reads a little awkwardly. Just "folded hundreds of times" or "over" a specific number of times would sound better I think.<br /><br />Anyhow, that's just me being picky. If you're writing one of these a day that's pretty good. A good character sketch here that was an interesting and enjoyable read.chefjohnhumphreyshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16780690766019161737noreply@blogger.com